It looked great and I can see effort went to it, but I think the script should have been better. Didn't come off as funny to me. Maybe expand more on that last joke?
Not the most exciting animation. Flash takes effort though.
As for the sound, did you embed it with the AS or FLA file? If you used a loader, then you need to make sure you placed the sounds on a website somewhere, and load that URL. I suggest embedding them though. You have plenty of space left in the file to do so.
Just keep practicing! You'll get the hang of it!
This was a hilarious animation! The script was great, the animation was done well, and the ending was a surprise! Good job!
The only thing I would possibly change is the rating. I think it would be better at a Teen rating due to the mild language and the crude content. Your call though. Great job again!
Ohhh yeeeaaaaah. We can do that, can't we!?
Thanks for the heads up, homie!~
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